Romeo and Juliet - Final Draft (REVISED)

In the book 'Romeo and Juliet' by William Shakespeare, a street fight occurs between the Montague's and Capulet’s Prince Escalus comes in and breaks up the fight. But threatens them if they fight again. Romeo enters, very sad. Romeo is in love, with Rosaline, but is afraid that the woman he loves doesn't love him back. Later in the book, Mercutio, Romeo's friend and Prince Escalus's cousin, invites Romeo to accompany him to the Capulet's party, to try to get Romeo to forget about Rosaline. At the party, Romeo meets Juliet and they fall in love. Romeo changes in the story because at first, all he cared about Rosaline. But after he met Juliet, all of his thoughts about Rosaline vanished.

"Out of her favor, where I am in love." (1.1.173)

This quote shows that Romeo is truly, madly, deeply in love with Rosaline, even though he knows that she doesn't love him back. Because of this, Romeo is very depressed. And all Romeo talks about is Rosaline, and how she doesn't love him. But Romeo doesn't want to give up on her yet. In Act 1 Scene 1, Romeo is complaining about how Rosaline doesn't love him the way he loves her. But this is before Romeo knows anything about Juliet. This quote also shows how committed Romeo is to Rosaline. Romeo doesn't care about how Rosaline feels about him. All he cares about is her. He wants to please her and do something to get her notice him, but she doesn't give Romeo any respect. That is why Romeo gives up on trying to please Rosaline. That is also why he agrees to go to the Capulet's party, in order to help him forget about Rosaline breaking his heart.

"What lady is that which doth enrich the hand. Of yonder knight?" (1.5. 41-42)

This quote shows that Romeo has forgotten about Rosaline and has finally noticed someone else. And Romeo has now fallen in love with Juliet and out of love with Rosaline. In Act 1 Scene 5, Romeo first spots Juliet during a dance and instantaneously falls in love with her. When Juliet first spots Romeo, she falls in love with him as well. After the dance is over, Romeo goes in search of Juliet. When he finds her, he startles her and greets her with a kiss on her hand. This is where Juliet begins to fall in love with Romeo. This is also where Romeo completely forgets about Rosaline. The two sneak off and get away from the crowd of people and share a kiss or two. But soon after, the two are separated and soon find out that they are sworn enemies. Even though they aren't supposed to be together, the two realize that they can't stand to be without one another.

"Th' exchange of thy love’s faithful vow for mine." (2. 2. 127)

This quote shows that Romeo and Juliet have very strong feelings for each other. After the party, Romeo returns to Capulet's mansion in search for Juliet, because he cannot stop thinking about her. When he arrives at the Capulet's garden, he overhears Juliet confessing her love for him. She makes a long speech about how she wishes they can be together, but they can't because they're sworn enemies. Romeo then speaks and startles Juliet. The two both confess their love for each other. After confessing their strong feelings, they decide that they want to be married and be together forever. Even though it's forbidden. Many people in Verona find out about the wedding, including Juliet's cousin Tybalt. Tybalt then battles Romeo but is killed in the process. When Prince Escalus and the Capulet's find out about Tybalt's death, they banish Romeo from Verona. But after Romeo is banished, he doesn't know how to act or control himself because he is so far away and separated from his beloved wife, Juliet.

In Conclusion, Romeo changes in the story because in the beginning of the story, Romeo was truly, madly, deeply in love with Rosaline. But at Capulet's party, Romeo spotted Juliet and fell in love with her. He also completely forgot about Rosaline. Juliet also fell in love with Romeo at the party. Later that night, the two confessed their love for each other and decided to get married, that way they could be together forever. The text relates to then world because it shows how two people, who care very much about each other, can make decisions for themselves. The text also shows that young people can make their own decisions. I think that the reader should think about how Romeo was able to quickly forget about all his feelings about Rosaline after he met Juliet. It shows the reader how strongly in love Romeo is with Juliet and how he cannot let her go. For example, when Balthazar tells Romeo that Juliet is dead, the first thing that Romeo does is race back to Verona, as fast as he can. So that he can see Juliet one last time.

Romeo and Juliet - Final Draft

In the book 'Romeo and Juliet' by William Shakespeare, a street fight occurs between the Montague's and Capulet’s Prince Escalus comes in and breaks up the fight. But threatens them if they fight again. Romeo enters, very sad. Romeo is in love, with Rosaline, but is afraid that the woman he loves doesn't love him back. Later in the book, Mercutio, Romeo's friend and Prince Escalus's cousin, invites Romeo to accompany him to the Capulet's party, to try to get Romeo to forget about Rosaline. At the party, Romeo meets Juliet and they fall in love. Romeo changes in the story because at first, all he cared about Rosaline. But after he met Juliet, all of his thoughts about Rosaline vanished.

"Out of her favor, where I am in love." (1.1.173)

This quote shows that Romeo is truly, madly, deeply in love with Rosaline, even though he knows that she doesn't love him back. Because of this, Romeo is very depressed. And all Romeo talks about is Rosaline, and how she doesn't love him. But Romeo doesn't want to give up on her yet. In Act 1 Scene 1, Romeo is complaining about how Rosaline doesn't love him the way he loves her. But this is before Romeo knows anything about Juliet.

"What lady is that which doth enrich the hand. Of yonder knight?" (1.5. 41-42)

This quote shows that Romeo has forgotten about Rosaline and has finally noticed someone else. And Romeo has now fallen in love with Juliet and out of love with Rosaline. In Act 1 Scene 5, Romeo first spots Juliet during a dance and instantaneously falls in love with her. When Juliet first spots Romeo, she falls in love with him as well. After the dance is over, Romeo goes in search of Juliet. When he finds her, he startles her and greets her with a kiss on her hand. This is where Juliet begins to fall in love with Romeo. This is also where Romeo completely forgets about Rosaline. The two sneak off and get away from the crowd of people and share a kiss. But soon after, the two are separated and soon find out that they are sworn enemies.

"Th' exchange of thy love’s faithful vow for mine." (2. 2. 127)

This quote shows that Romeo and Juliet have very strong feelings for each other. After the party, Romeo returns to Capulet's mansion in search for Juliet, because he cannot stop thinking about her. When he arrives at the Capulet's garden, he overhears Juliet confessing her love for him. She makes a long speech about how she wishes they can be together, but they can't because they're sworn enemies. Romeo then speaks and startles Juliet. The two both confess their love for each other. After confessing their strong feelings, they decide that they want to be married and be together forever. Even though it's forbidden.

In Conclusion, Romeo changes in the story because at first, all he cared about Rosaline. But after he met Juliet, all of his thoughts about Rosaline vanished. In the beginning of the story, Romeo was truly, madly, deeply in love with Rosaline. But at Capulet's party, Romeo spotted Juliet and fell in love with her. He also completely forgot about Rosaline. Juliet also fell in love with Romeo at the party. Later that night, the two confessed their love for each other and decided to get married, that way they could be together forever. The text relates to then world because it shows how two people, who care very much about each other, can make decisions for themselves. Also it shows that young people can make their own decisions. I think that the reader should think about how Romeo was able to quickly forget about all his feelings about Rosaline after he met Juliet.

Romeo and Juliet - Thesis and Outline

I. Introduction:

a. Lead:

I think that Romeo changed a lot in the story because at first, all he cared about was Rosaline. But then when he met Juliet, all his thoughts about Rosaline vanished.

b. Title and author; brief context or background:

'Romeo and Juliet' by William Shakespeare; A street fight occurs between the Montagues and Capulets. Prince Escalus comes in and breaks up the fight. But threatens them if they do it again. Romeo enters, very sad. Romeo is in love but is afraid that the woman he loves doesn't love him back.

c. Thesis/Focus (overall interpretation):

Romeo changes in the story because at first, all he cared about was Rosaline. But then when he met Juliet, all his thoughts about Rosaline vanished.

II. Body:

a.. Paragraph 1 (observation/inference):

*One important observation or inference that supports my focus is:

 In Act 1 Scene 1, Romeo is complaining about how Rosaline doesn't love him the way that he loves her. But this is before Romoe knows anything about Juliet.

*This is shown in (relevant evidence/quotation from text):

"Out of her favor, where I am in love." - Romeo (Act 1 Scene 1)
 

*This quote shows that:

This quote shows that Romeo is truly, madly, deeply in love with Rosaline. But Romeo knows that she doesn't love him back. Because of this, Romeo is very depressed. And all Romeo talks about is Rosaline.

b. Paragraph 2 (observation/inference):

*One importantt observation or inference that supports my focus is:

In Act 1 Scene 5, Romeo first spots Juliet adn instantaniously falls in love with her. When Juliet first spots Romeo, she falls in love with him as well. But the two are seperated and soon find out that they are sworn enemies.

*This is shown in (relevant evidence/quotation from text):

"What lady is that which doth enrich the hand. Of yonder knight?" - Romeo (Act 1 Scene 5)
 

*This quote shows that:

This quote shows that Romeo has forgotten about Rosaline and has finally noticed someone else. And Romeo has now fallen in love with Juliet and out of love with Rosaline.

c. Paragraph 3 (observation/inference):

*One important observation or inference that supporta my focus is:

In Act 2 Scene 2, Romeo and Juliet confess their love for eachother. And the two decide to be married.

*This is shown in (relevant evidence/quotation from text):

"Th' exchange of thy love’s faithful vow for mine." - Romeo (Act 2 Scene 2)
 

*This quote shows that:

This quote shows that Romeo and Juliet have very strong feelings for eachother. So strong, that they want to be married and be together forever.

III. Conclusion:

i. How does the text relate to you, the reader, the world, and/or another text?

The text relates to then world because it shows how two people, who care very much about eachother, can make decisions for themselves. Also it shows that young people can make their own decisions.

ii. What do you think the reader should think, feel, or know about the topic?

I think that the reader should think about how Romeo was able to quickly forget about all his feelings about Rosaline after he met Juliet.

Monthly Nonfiction Reading Response - Dissection Ban

"A staggering 19 million insects and animals belonging to a variety of species will be saved every academic year when the ban on dissection in laboratories for undergraduate and postgraduate is fully implemented."

This article taught me that many elementary, middle and high schools dissect animals in science class. They don't only dissect frogs. But also cats, mice, rats, worms, dogs, rabbits, fetal pigs and fish. More than 19 million animals wind up being dissected each year. Also with more branches of life sciences, that 19 million will quickly turn into a much higher number in the upcoming years.

"More than 2.5 million undergraduate and postgraduate students of Zoology and other branches of life science in the country end up dissecting approximately 19 million animals every academic year. And with emergence of newer branches of life sciences including biophysics, biochemistry and biodiversity, and an increase in the number of educational institutions, the number of animals dissected was also expected to grow substantially in the coming years."

Every year, millions of undergraduate students dissect animals. Totals up to 19 million each year. And if we continue to dissect the harmless animals, those numbers will become sky high. They might even reach up to the billions if we don't stop soon. Also, after the students dissect the animal, they just throw them out. That is just a complete waste of a life. How would you feel if you were taken away from your home to be killed and thrown away?

"Dissection is not just cruel, it is also antiquated. Studies have shown that non-animal methods teach anatomy and complex biological processes as well as or better than do animal laboratories, and they have proved much more effective and humane."

Some dissection classes in schools don't even teach the correct way of dissecting the animals. Also, most students don't pay any attention to the teacher when he/she is demonstrating the dissection. So the students are just playing with the animal. Which is another reason why dissection should be banned. And if you make a mistake when dissecting the animal, you can't start over.

"At the same time, their use will save universities an enormous amount of money compared to the expense of purchasing animals year after year, explains B.K. Sharma, Associate Professor and head of Zoology Department at R.L Saharia Government PG College, Kaladera (Jaipur), Rajasthan. He was a member of the UGC Core Expert Committee that was set up to consider ‘Discontinuation of Dissection of Animals in Zoology/Life Science Education in Indian Universities and Colleges.'"

After reading this article, I have come to the understanding that the world is in the middle of animal abuse. But other people think that is for a good cause - education. When really, student who have no choice but to take this class have a different opinion about the dissection. I would consider dissection abuse. Because the people who obtain those animals are taking them from shelters, just to kill them. Which is extremely cruel. Also many children don't enjoy dissecting these animals. But if we stop animal dissection, then more than 19 million animals and insects will be saved each year.

Works Cited

http://www.thehindu.com/news/national/dissection-ban-will-save-19-million-animals-every-year/article2704638.ece

Monthly Nonfiction Reading Response - Arctic Meltdown by Justin Gillis

"Every summer, the sea ice in the Arctic Ocean melts as the region heats up. And every year, as fall arrives and temperatures drop, the ice begins to build up again."

This article taught me that every season the temperature changes. In the summer it gets hot and in the winter it gets cold. But in the Arctic, during the summer the ice melts and in the winter the water turns back into ice. But lately, not all of the water has frozen back. And the animals there are in danger.

"Most scientists have long believed that the climate's warming--roughly 2.5 degrees Fahrenheit over land in the past century, with most of that occurring since 1980--is caused largely by the human release of greenhouse gases from burning fossil fuels."

Over the past century, temperatures have risen about 2.5°F. It might not seem like a lot, but it makes a huge difference to our climate and our planet. The Arctic isn't the only place in the world that is in trouble. But it is also one of the worst defenders. In the United States, there have been hurricanes, droughts and other violent and extreme storms and weather patterns. The warmer the planet gets, the more we have to suffer.

"Some of them (scientists) think the shrinking Arctic sea ice has already started to alter atmospheric patterns in the Northern Hemisphere, contributing more extreme weather in the United States and other countries, buy that link is not considered proved."

In addition to the temperatures rising, scientists also think that the global warming is altering atmospheric patterns in the Northern Hemisphere. Scientists also think that extreme weather will become more common as the planet warms. But there might be other changes in other parts of the world. Such as extreme weather and natural disasters. But the weather problems will become more and more frequent in the future if we don't try to make a change.

"A vast majority of scientists, however, agree that extreme weather events--everything from heat waves to blizzards--will become more common as the planet warms."

After reading this article, I have come to understand that the world is in the middle of severe global warming. It is not only harming the Arctic, but it is also hurting other parts of the world. Not just places in the cold, but also the United States and the United Kingdom. More and more violent storms and crazy weather are going to be coming our way. And if we don't try to stop it, we will be in serious trouble in the future. Every year, the average global temperature has gone up a lot. And eventually it will be too high and the whole world will be underwater. Hopefully before then, we can try to help the environment.

Works Cited:

Gillis, Justin. "Arctic Meltdown." The New York Times Upfront 19 Nov. 2012: 8-11. Web.